I wrote this originally just for Marguerite. this is revised as the original is hers. How is this short one.

"the prince"





Tears run down my wizened face,


wishing for just once.


I the mighty Darkened Prince,


weeping like a fool.


Once it seems so long ago,


I stood so straight and tall,


A prince is just in waiting,


to the throne of the true King.


I may never reach that high,


At this thought I merely sigh.

I wrote this originally just for Marguerite. this is revised as the original is hers. How is this short one.
Maybe it's time for the Prince to be crowned King: perhaps Sovereignty is what you seek...
Reply:Nice poetic pause at the end, giving the reader time to ponder and what not!
Reply:It's pretty good.


Nice work:)
Reply:Short and to the point. As always, I don't have much to say. I am always speechless when reading your writings.
Reply:awesome master! i like it!