Saturday, November 14, 2009

An Acrostic for Marguerite. I hope you like it.?

"marguerite'





Many times shes saved me,


And held me by my hand.


Reaching cross the time zones


Gladly listening to my rants.


Understanding all my anger


Even when it's very late


Right there when I need her


In fact she is a blast.


To her I owe my sanity


Even to this very day.

An Acrostic for Marguerite. I hope you like it.?
I love it Steve. You make me blush. Remember how we first met? You wiped the tears from my eyes. I am forever grateful to you, my dear friend.
Reply:This is a beautiful poem for a beautiful woman who has helped us all with her words of wisdom and her poetry.





My favorite line was:


Reaching cross the time zones





It just shows that you do not need to be next to someone to truly help them...I am learning this more and more as I interact with all of my friends on here
Reply:Many of the poets get excited


As she saunters down the way


Rarely missing a chance to catch an eye


Grand designs in the minds of many


Urgent desires, pants of plenty


Every eye is on her


Regarding each move she makes


Inching their way towards


Tenderness


Enchantment, delight, escape...
Reply:A fine poem dedicated to a very worthy woman. I really like the image "Reaching across the time zones." It is very visual and mysterious at the same time.
Reply:Since I am now the author od 2 acrostics, I guess I have a right to comment on yours, since 2 should make me something of an expert by Y!A normalcy standards.





I think it's a good acrostic about an outstanding lady.
Reply:I really liked this one. Marguerite is very lucky to have an


admirer like you. I hope she realizes it.
Reply:Bravo, Dark Prince. You beat me to it! I'm happy she is honored so! She inspires many here. Including me.
Reply:very well done.....and i hope this poem shall rule her day and keep her the the happiest...
Reply:How many girls have you emailed this to?
Reply:i really like that one ...i wana print out these

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