A Poem - The Assistant - Do You Like?

You're the pretty assistant


was how they first met





A pink blush was the response


with eyes at half mast


smiles lit and started a past





A gentleman from Britain


with upper class talk -


she answered with pure New York





She crisscrossed her legs


take a letter Marguerite


he leaned back and grinned replete





Accents blended as did hearts


sequestered meetings


late nights and data sheetings





He and she and appointed roles


mixed and equalized


a marriage uncompromised

A Poem - The Assistant - Do You Like?
Beautiful, as the lady herself.
Reply:Marguerite, this is great. I love the way it begins with "smiles lit and started a past" what a great way to set the scene where we get a brief look at budding love. Equally, the last line, "a marriage uncompromised", is a great way to conclude the poem. Lovely work.
Reply:With adroitness of thinking, and penning, you have mastered the 'Assistant'. Uniqueness, originality...for an otherwise common occurence....in someone else's writing, this would have become 'common' and ordinary.


Oh good! Gooder and goodest!!!
Reply:I think it is fine. Yes this is DP. I am sorry for everything. Please forgive me. I have reconciled with my wife and I miss our conversations. Please un block me. PLease.
Reply:An absolute treasure. Like a marriage uncompromised!
Reply:Great lines like: she answered with pure New York, with eyes at half mast and accents blended as did hearts. Well penned. My compliments.
Reply:A lovely poetic story and a memory to treasure.
Reply:Do not throw this one away!





It deserves a place hanging in the Martian Communal Dome, in a gold frame.
Reply:sappy, but nice!
Reply:Me like it...





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