Tuesday, November 17, 2009

A haiku for him who mentioned all of you.?

Marguerite put him right


Squirrel got sheepish


Now I want a fight

A haiku for him who mentioned all of you.?
great work Moleypenney (did you work for bond?)


and another euwaite masterpiece....


but wouldn't the last line work better as:


"Now I want a fluffin"?
Reply:WTF? OMG! Duh! IDK...





Now what did I miss?
Reply:!!!
Reply:Your first try?
Reply:Baaa, baaaa.
Reply:I feel extremely illiterate at times when I read your stuff my friend, and that of some others.


It is worth coming for a visit each day.
Reply:Violence is lightning


Don't give in to temptation


Peace is forever
Reply:Doesn't it seem quite right and proper that Free man's loose change is up above him. Shilding his eyes with the *Loose Stuffs*!!!





Step Down Mahn!!!
Reply:I feel like a hoke oooooooh this morning, whatever that is.It sounds like a bad cold.ahha now thanks to Annabelle I finally got it. hehe.
Reply:But . . . but . . . you don't have the proper amount of syllables for a haiku. How's about calling it a Yahoo instead?
Reply:Do you like my new poem?





*****


There’s a patch in the corner of my garden


Filled with carrots and turnips and rutabaga


Underground goodies, row after row


All planted there for my little blue mole…





*****
Reply:What? Did someone just try to pull the wool over my eyes again?





I am with Turdla, I think I missed something here, like maybe graduating 6th grade.
Reply:im sorry but who/whats this about?


nice poem tho

Teeth Cleaning

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